yep…that’s it,
the monolith.
Hush! Shh, yeah,
I know I know
it’s beautiful,
yadda yadda yadda
cus blue and layers
it’s carved and worn
by wind and time
and it chips off
pieces of itself
that melt and feed
oceans, and then feed
cloud hopes, which become
streams, rivers, lakes
and again back
to become itself
once more
and monolithic blue
born anew.
but just stand
here, awhile with me,
where I am frozen
and caught in the glare
of its pressure and presence
and eventually
your face will grow numb
your toes will lose movement
and you will feel
the tempting tentative tickle
of its sinister frozen fingers
around your warm and tender
heart, so red,
so achingly red
and stark against
that monolithic blue.
GORGEOUS, Charissa!
Thank you lil mama.
Wow! Great stuff, Charissa.
Thank you, Melissa…your comments are my gold
LOVE revisiting poems after I’ve heard you read them aloud. It allows for another layer of depth (one that is unintended–not THOSE layers we speak of).
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