Time running in streaming ribbons behind laughing children
twisting in a holiday blur of color, movement flowing
Time swimming sinister, sleek in the silent night
hungry to devour the Child there before it quiet
and in that cattle trough.
Snuffling with snout insistent, inhaling fragrances
of common birth and bearing…and something else
coming…the smell of death overlaid in incense
but underneath…the smell of…what?
The smell of other.
And then those guileless eyes flash open,
dark and endless but not with perpetuity
no! Endless in the Moment never ceasing!
Endless in a present never moving but never still either,
And time found itself hooked and billeted and beached.
Time is just a boat, no…a moat…a mote in eternity’s eye
Time is but a note in Wonder’s Symphony!
And with the Baby’s birth inside of Time
Eternal bells of joy ring out the chime
Olly Olly Oxen FREE!
The season of eternity is nigh,
when God gives Their response to our hurt cry
and renders youth and age trite matters moot
and blows away the ashes and the soot
revealing hearts like stars still shine beneath.
Kneel where you are, for that is where it is,
that lowly manger unseen by the great
and in that manger, there inside of you
your face upturned and wet with Heaven’s dew
the Christ Child comes to make all things brand new.
This is deep i like it i can relate to it
OOhh!! I am absolutely delighted when someone gets the depths I fold inside my work! I hide it there, and it waits for those who look.
thanks for looking, that in itself honors me.
This:
“Time is just a boat, no…a moat…a moat in eternity’s eye
Time is but a note in Wonder’s Symphony!”
Lovely.
And the last stanza??
Brilliant.
Thank you ❤
wekkum.
I especially love that “The Season of Eternity” and “The Season of Redeeming Time” are two sides of the same coin, and also bookends…and also are the 2 Covenants that Christmas deals with and how they meet there, the Manger sandwiched there in the middle…
Most Sacred sandwich ever!!
LOLOL!!!! Love that!!
Btw…this was a HUGE hit last nite at group. They loved the rhythm I read the part you quoted with. There are pauses and tumbles in those ellipses…